blogger failed to upload my rough animatic, so here's some jpgs. The animatic of this, however, turned out boring. We need to think of some creative ways we can do transitions. got inspired by
http://youtu.be/T6zDfxZ4NcE but I don't know what to do now...
Yeah it lacks the excitement that this trailer needs. It focuses too much on the happy times.
ReplyDeleteAlso I feel that Chiloe is a bad place to end the trailer. Trailers have no resolution, they are suppose to get you interested in the film or book enough to go see it and see the resolution there.
Maybe if those panel parts were at the beginning and then the flash back to Berkeley area shots.
Also there are too many close ups. We need to get a sense of place and travel. The physical and mental journey of this girl are both really important, because without the physical journey the other wouldn't have happened.