So Sunday at 6 workday. Monday at 6 workday. Finished by Tuesday. Seriously. I know we all want to fix up our stuff for the BFA gallery jury.
So Dang since you couldn't make it to BFA Luis and Al critiqued your flashing shot and I put it on the server. It is a suggestion of what you should do.
Crits from class that I remember:
Less panning.
Maya got chubby in Al's club shot
Speed up the craziness in the club shot
Club scene needs pills
Hallway shadow
No Zombie Popo. Teeth make people less zombie. gaping holes not good.
Clear up or redo flashing shots(Working on it.)
The girl in Alvyn's shot needs less detail and more form
We need fire. Which I'll work on in photoshop.
PLUS: paint over ppl's work to make the style sync up. Less panning @ end, vignette the book?
ReplyDeleteThanks, I'll be on campus 7:30 tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteI have work
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