I for got to reupload this on Saturday... but I changed the hair this morning so it matches Al's design.
So I want to try and get this to a realistic point(which I am clearly far from) before I animate the layers.
I was thinking I'd add freckles and bruises at some point too. But The medical band isn't reading as it should yet at all.
But I am going to continue to work on my still shots for a while then return to this.
the rope kind of looks like a big spaghetti, lol. i just htink it needs to be tightened so that the arm is a bit bulging around the band. also a flatter more rubberband like band might work better
ReplyDeleteand the way shes holdin it in her mouth is too relaxed, the teeth should show and the head shoould be pointed away from the body
ReplyDeletewould like to know if this moment is before or after she shoots up?
ReplyDeleteIf before it looks too relaxed...
Also the band is really high on her arm. I've never seen that, so I don't know if it'd work that high up. But if it's in your reference then ok.
The lighting, and underlying structure of the body/face/rubber doesnt seem quite right. I would expect things like creases where the shoulder is tense, more tense mouth/face muscles, tighter band flattened with pressure... It'd probably help if you flip your comp in PS to see how things line up too.