Shorter pan at the beginning.
Eye trace at the end.
Get rid of the syringe and drugs at the end that are around the notebook. too cliche.
Courtney hated the end text. So lets find text!
Star pan slowed down.
Get rid of the veins in the eyes in Luis's shot.
How the rosary drops.
Things noticed while watching it over and over:
In Luis trucker shot make the silhouette read better and more solid.
The hallway at end needs to twist.
Forest needs to read like a Oregon forest
Make the guy in the robbery shot creepy look.
Final music decisions
sound effects-Look for your shot
ie- sea sounds, footsteps, breathing, heartbeat, etc
CHRISTY IS GOING TO START THE COLOR SCRIPT, BUT WOULD YOU BE ABLE TO FINISH IT AL????
list sounds pretty short, were they over critical? what else did i miss?
ReplyDeletewe're changing the beginning and end a bit, using my pan shot for both. I'm gonna try to come up with a couple examples tonight. They had a lot to say on each of these points, but this was the jist of it.
DeleteKIM: is it possible to make the animatic smaller? I can't DL the file @ this size.
ReplyDeleteI replaced it with a smaller one now. Tell me if it is still too large.
Deleteapologies for missing you all today. I just woke up about thirty minutes ago. I will jump right on the color script and have something for you guys tonight.
ReplyDeletehey Al, I did one, you want to look at it?
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