Dang this is looking really good. But I think you should go through and fix some of the stars that look too much like a brush stroke as opposed to a star.
I also think the characters need some adjustment. The telescope does not read like a telescope rt now, mostly cuz popo's arm mirrors it. I'd also separate the milky way from the tree and make it a little less dense. When we pan up in this shot, there needs to be plenty of plain stars to fill the spacein the shot after it, so I'd add more stars above.
Dang this is looking really good. But I think you should go through and fix some of the stars that look too much like a brush stroke as opposed to a star.
ReplyDeleteI also think the characters need some adjustment. The telescope does not read like a telescope rt now, mostly cuz popo's arm mirrors it. I'd also separate the milky way from the tree and make it a little less dense. When we pan up in this shot, there needs to be plenty of plain stars to fill the spacein the shot after it, so I'd add more stars above.
ReplyDeletealright thanks I'll get to it.
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